Nice jazz feel

This had some nice jazzy feel about it and it doesnt play too rough either just plays along at a nice pace, hope you make more simular stuff like it it was great all the way around, And I mean that from the start to finish very solid work, Keep making solid stuff like this.

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Keep working on it!
The idea is great!
The prógression is quiet rigid so it doesnt really flow.
try to build more of a story with the song
Introduction prologue mid part intermission end part final climax and maybe outro
If you think and feel more in this way to song will flow more.
Good parts but now the flow :D

Bretty good but there are some things I like and some things I don't like about this composition. Ideas are not bad

It starts off a little slowly, but the beat is very catchy and even danceable. It gets repetitive a lot, and it could use some more rhythmic variation, especially with the bass. I thought the piano and strings were a little too loud and penetrating as compared to the relaxing mood. That said, I love the structure and instruments. I just think it could use some more variation. For example, instead of just repeating the same riff at the end four times in a row with the saxophone, how about you add onto it and add a couple more notes each time, just for some melodic development? A more conclusive ending might also help. Overall, though, it's good. I like your style, W00ki3. It has a lot of potential. Keep it up! ;D