Impressive mixing and interesting instrumentation
I felt that it got slightly repetitive at some points
Also, I did feel like some of the melodies did not fit in (such as the xylophone thing at 1:28), and it did sometimes feel messy. Try to be more minimal
You should put more thought into the song structure, as well as transitions (e.g. 2:00)
4/4 keep it up :)
Sleepycoaster 
