Hope this is an improvement since my last song. I focused on organizing my material a bit more so it feels more structured. I thought I did a nice job at keeping a good amount of variety as to keep the audience's attention as well. I also beefed up the beat a bit, which I think helps. I do think that the beat gets a little too "crunchy" at times, but I just went for it. Tell me what you think; I'd love to hear feedback!