It gets realy good at 1:20, love the "sewer" level vibe, btw one of the instruments in the backround sounds like a faint voice and when I heard it I tought my mom was calling me and get confused when she said she didint😂. Nice song

Nice track

This was notbad at all I like the sounds seems like some quality could be more polished though but it's still pretty good and I like what this does as it has a good vibe about it so nice job here anyways keep working on these great pieces

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small polish but not much

~X~

im not a fan, the sound is just awful.

The bass rhythm is killer.. totally rave material. The melodies are awesome and the structure is good. There seems to be some clipping in the track.. watch out for that! My tracks used to clip ALL the freggin time but it was only until after I moved on to Ableton that I realized how much better it was if it doesnt clip. Which DAW do you use?

Another quick suggestion.. there seem to be some overlapping frequencies especially in the low register.. if it's not a sub or a kick, don't be afraid to cut out the low ends with a high-pass filter, it'll clean up the mix a lot.

Great work!!

Four days isn't that long, you don't want to know the lengths I go procrastinating with some things. O_o It's a cool track btw, I like the start and the end best, when the bouncy beat that's playing for most of the track stops I realize... that part was actually a little annoying, maybe because it never shifts tone, it's always the same. overall good listen; keep it going!

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