This is fantastic! Extremely strong production. Love how hard hitting it is while retaining interesting melodies and good pacing.

While I enjoyed the dark vibes you provided, I feel like this piece needs some more polish and examination. The drum work is still remarkable and it's probably the best part of the song, but I wish you offered something more than that, like more background synths and rhythmic/sequenced synths, because the atmosphere by itself isn't bad but I wish you'd developed it further.

The bass could have been more present in the mix and slightly more distorted since the general mood is supposed to be ominous and dark. What about more hints at traditional Japanese music, like a shakuhachi sample or woodblocks? The shamisen you used kinda reminds me of Photek but it honestly gets quite repetitive after a while if it weren't for the ever-evolving drums.

Overall, it's still an enjoyable piece, if quite straight to the point and somewhat fitting of your art choice.
//FD