Interesting
Well this was pretty interesting it was pretty solid, the "VOCALS" are pretty good aswell, and the backround music was not bad all, it was all point on.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To be honest I like it as is.
~X~
I made this song with my band a long time ago, It was an awesome project we did all by ourselves, we even got into the local radio. Unfortunately the band is actually inactive, growing up sucks and my attempts to keep us together seem to have failed since we never got to concrete our project I'm sharing this with the community, hope you like ^_^
Check our Facebook page for more stuff https://www.facebook.com/pages/Moby-Dick/138481416192578?ref=ts&fref=ts
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OMG!! Thanks so much for the frontpage :') awesome!!
lyrics:
The Deal
You were shinning
in the spotlight baby
must have felt like in
the limelight
But the truth is that
you ain’t so though
for a couple dates
it was enough
Took so Little
just to realize
that you left me
with no truths but lies
now I’m coming up
better find somewhere to grab
I’m coming
I’m coming
no matter who is falling
I thought you were for real
In a couple days you broke the deal
there’s a name that I can call you on
and it has to do with what you've done
Silly games we were playing
sorry what were you saying
really? Please tell me a little more
turns out we’re not compatible
I’m coming up
better Find somewhere to grab
I’m coming
I’m coming
no matter who is falling
I thought you were for real
I a couple days you broke the deal
there’s a name that I can call you on
and it has to do with what you've done
I thought you were for real
In a couple days you broke the deal
there’s a name that I can call you on
and it has to do with what you’ve done
What you've done
Got me spending time
got me spending money
something you don’t know
You’re not my honey
Yeah!!
I thought you were for real
In a couple days you broke the deal
there’s a name that I can call you on
and it has to do with what you’ve done
I thought you were for real
In a couple days you broke the deal
there’s a name that I can call you on
and it has to do with what you've done
Interesting
Well this was pretty interesting it was pretty solid, the "VOCALS" are pretty good aswell, and the backround music was not bad all, it was all point on.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To be honest I like it as is.
~X~
Vocals are hard to understand, but the song has a nice beat.
I'ts always a risk to add vocals :/
nice, man)
:D Thanks!!
Nice work. Song sounds great. Congrats on front page! Upload more. Also, I wonder if it would be cool if I could play this on my radio show?
PM me any info you would like said about your band or where you want listeners sent to find more of your music. :)
Thanks a lot man :D I'll be uploading more content, in the following weeks, YEEEHEAA you can share our song in the Radio that'd be awesome, you can link people to this newgrounds account or to our Facebook page provided in my description, we'll be sharing everything there ^_^ thanks a bunch, nothing makes us happier than being listened too :D
:')
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.