you sneaky retard, i caught the mean word in the titsle!

interesting, but not as complex as it could be

this could be much improved with a more diverse melody, a bass part, and a bit less echo. i'm looking forward to hear what else you come up with. good start.

ummm

the begining noise got anoying...
next time use diffrent instroments...
good job though for your first,
chek out my first submision then chek out my latest and see how much i improved...
you can do the same with alot of practise and hard work.

:D