It's quite an interesting piece with a "synthy" edge that is impossible to not smile at. Dynamics are a little tight, and given how eager you've been experimenting with Sytrus, I would have loved some more background sounds as to give your piece a more psychedelic feel.
Structure-wise, it's a nice progression and it feels like one big build-up that stretches for four minutes, although I still would have loved some variety at this point, possibly by introducing more themes or even some slow-paced, half-time drums.
I like your vision, and overall, I think this track is quite the homage to your artwork of choice.
//FD