Impressive
hmm, the first thought that comes to me rnission is.
"How much would this song rock if he had used some good synths?"
And the answer is "Is Jesus ready for such a song?"
Probably not.
This song has insane potential, but the bad samples you've used hinder it's power, especially that choir, with a good choir synth, this song would nearly double its power.
However putting all sample quality aside, I really liked the melody here, it's driving, it image invoking, and it gets the job done. I didn't really think it was as driving or fast paced as it should be. Right now I feel like its bordering on some huge crash, some huge climax that didn't seem to show itself. Good melody work for sure, I think that may be the songs strongest point here. Quite diverse.
Great stuff rnission. 5/5 from me, if you like, I can show you how to use VST's, or in short, small programs that give you awesome sound quality. Keep them coming ^^.