Good variety
This has a good variety on this piece here I like the sound that it puts out I think some more instraments with more unique sounds could be in there and it could be longer as well but I like your vibe and your style here you know this is a loop but is good enough to stretch out longer into something more like a song on it's own just needs to be stretched out more
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A tad bit longer and some extra sounds in there
~X~