I am not a pro.. but I like this!
I can imagine some ruined electric-robotic-super-technologic place in the far future, where the robots rule over human, and you have to escape from some prison and survive the killer high-tech robots! :D
I like mostly that distorted fade-in sounds and the rhodes/pad-synth(?) sound that comes at 0:16.
I would like to know how you made these sounds?
Nice little work here!
Now this inspires me to make a short ambient loop!