Nice

This has a nice feel to it and has some decent variaty about it you also bring the build up points here together and thats what I was hoping for, its a fast tune but also has some good slow points, a well rounded piece here so props to you on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe somewhat shorter.

~X~

dude i am hating Dj-GST

second thing where he bashes on people giving a good effort that sounds good. i like it keep it up dont pay attention to his crap and you'll go far

Hmm...

Well made track, nice vocals, but there is one major flaw that resulted in you receiving a four.

This isn't Speedcore. I'm guessing that the tempo of this track is around 160 bpm, whilst Speedcore tempo starts at 300 bpm.

This track is way to soft, slow, and way too "dreamy" sounding to be even close to Speedcore.

Still a fairly well made track, but unless you actualy know what Speedcore sounds like, don't label your tracks as such.

Hurr Durr

My face = The Angry face as the first 30 seconds of my music progresses and messes with his face

LOL

this song would definatly be in the top third of speedcore on newgrounds.

lol i looked at what entries this song was in and lolled massive. suits it good.

7/10
4/5
downloaded.
lolled at entry :)