Hmm...

Interesting. I can definitely see the potential of this. Definitely would agree with others, it needs some more dynamic variety. It just sounds like it's stuck on intro without any real progression, y'know? Get past that wall, and you're surely to push through.

Drums are thin, but I like it for what it is. Bass is there, but it could definitely use some more presence and warmth to make it fuller. A separate sub, surely, would do the trick under that modulated bassline.

I can dig it, man. Keep on keepin' on.

-J.P.

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Man, your drums are pretty...thin. I'd suggest using different samples for it. Also, somehow I got the feeling you added too much reverb to it.

The song is pretty repetitive...and quiet. Maybe a different melody, some variations of the beat, and a little bump for the volume would do some good.

I don't know why, but I feel like the background's (I don't know a better word for it) a mess partially caused by the reverb on the drums, and something else that I can't really put my finger on.

Also, the lower frequencies is almost nonexistent in the track. Throw in a sub bass for good measure.

Typical chords. Cool intro sounds though! Yeah it's cool, but I almost expected a drop after that epic intro. I think the highs--the lead for instance--need more presence in the song. The song gets a little boring otherwise. I like the melody you chose, and the drums are pretty alright.
Overall, a good work!