I have to say that I agree with Wayv on this review though the track is constructed very well! I suggest reviewing your speaker placement and mixing environment. It sounds like you have the right idea about everything you want to do, but the bass is very lacking in power, probably because your set-up may not allow you to hear it fully. The sub could really be a lot more present and full, which sounds like your intention! I hate arguments that are like "throw money here and you'll be ok" though in this case it just sounds like you have the right ears, but maybe the wrong environment! It may be as simple as positioning your speakers differently, or in another room. Either way, this is a very cool track!

Sounds like a rap beat to me. Honestly though, it's not too shabby. I really like the melody you have, and the drums are pretty cool. At 1:30, where the bass drops, it's just not that good. The sound of the bass itself is what's boring. the melodies stay repetitive but cool, but your bass sounds are a little boring. At half way through the song, you begin to realize the song hasn't exactly progressed or anything.
Reading the description, I have to give you kudos.
Honestly, I thought the sound you use for the drop was a preset. Again, the melodies were cool, but maybe could have progressed more?
For a repetitive beat, which I think you meant it to be, it's really pretty catchy. I'm not the best judge of mixing, but it sounds pretty solid to me. =)
Nice track!