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I like it I can see it being played in between songs at a rave party while the other guy gets the song put in.

EFFECTS!

This was a bit alarming in the start, but you had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. The effects were interesting with the way you made the melody move to the left and right speaker.

I think the coolest part was the middle with the "Blown bottle" and the hard synth.

All the high pitch sounds were good but it might have been too much overall.

Hmmm...

Well, when you had the blown bottle sound, you shoulda kept it going up, and then let it drift back down, its ok track, and gets my 4. You also get to go on my favourites, I'm planning on keeping track of you =p, expect me to return every now and then and let ya know how your doing, hope you don't mind =p.

Meh

It was alright...like the other kid said, was kinda annoying, but I stuck around to hear the rest, it was alright, just needs less annoying sounds, but you ARE getting better at this, keep on tryin' and you'll get it right

WOW

That was one of the most anoying songs I have ever heard. It burned my ears. I didnt even stick around for the rest. That was worse then that noise that comes up on a scream flash.