The instrumental sounds kewl, but the vocals weren't that good tbh. I barerly even heard them over the guitar. I'll asume that you just record your vocals raw through a mix or something? If I were you I would have got a DAW or something to mi. The vocals with the instruments.
I also often heard that the vocals were both offbeat and offtone at times which became kinda annoying :/.
Digged the guitar though :).
3 stars.
-enochcity
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This started out as a whistle this morning...and I couldn't get it out of my head! So .. I wrote parts on the fly as I was dying in the heat of my apartment! Finally ending the day with a passible piece and no strength left to do any more.
This song is about a guy so caught up in online life that with the drugs and alcohol he looses touch with reality to the point of divorce.
Equipment used:
Godin Freeway 5 bass.
Kramer Striker II with Floyd rose.
Line 6 Spider IV 75 with FSB pedals.
Zoom R16 at 24bit rate for recording and vocals.
Audacity production studio.
Lyrics:
I don't want to go to work today,
Sit on my ass and play all day.
My game. Mine craft.
My porn. Jessica.
Facebook is where I meet my friends.
Porn and games are ruling my life,
And sometimes I'll say Hello to my wife.
My game Mine craft rule the world, rule the world.
My porn Jessica does it all, does it all.
Facebook is where I met my friends.
Divorce court is where it's gonna end.
......
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Hope someone likes this!
JQ
note: I've noticed some lagging using the on board effects and the Zoom... So I got to figure out a way around this!
I found this out using the direct inputs on the channels with the metronome...
Need to look at this further....
Edit ... I did find a piece of voc that I didn't like and fixed.
johnnyq1233 responds:
Thanks for the review! I kinda wanted it there as a punkish addition to an alternative metal rhythm. It was done in about 8 hours and being mixed under headphones is a bit of a challenge at best!
But, that's apartment life!
Under the cans and at volume it comes off alright on my end!
Will look at the tracks again and see what I can do!
Thanks...JQ
Edit: I listened to this a few times at different volumes and I could hear the words quite well. I did pick up a few chords that were not as I would want, but, I still like what I did!!!!
I didn't use a DAW because I wanted something more live than clinical!
Too many bands use the software environment to fix songs and make them a Sterile piece.
I like REAL music that has flaws and still has a rawness to it...
JQ
raising the bar up!
johnnyq1233 responds:
I had a minor breakdown and started from scratch!
After a zero bomb for the 3rd time one here I removed all my stuff!
But I want to give those who truly love music the chance to hear all that is here!
This actually started as a whistle this morning and I couldn't get it out of my head!
So I started to figure out how I was going to pull this off in a day! It all just came together so nice and very little effort.
Thanks for you support!
JQ
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