Perfect as an opening track. Keep it up. :)
I have no idea what genre this is. I don't think it really fits perfectly into any of the options on Newgrounds, but I'm open to suggestions! This is the opening track on my upcoming (and free) EP. I'm really happy with the sound of this one. I'm always open to feedback though! Let me know what you think!
Perfect as an opening track. Keep it up. :)
Thanks! ^_^
The start is quite nice, is it a movie sample or something?
Then your intro. It sounds quite dry and unmodified, you could have presented some more atmosphere there, create it with reverb or a pad sound in the background to just fill it right from the get go a little more, that way it would have fit a lot nicer with the beginning.
Your drums don't grab me as something awesome, they sound plain and the rhythm pattern is not special or attention grabbing. You could have layered them here and there and make them stand out a bit more. Same thing with the other sounds, they all sound a bit 1 dimentional so you should make them fatter somehow, use layering compression whatever you think sounds best in the specific scenario.
It's nicely mixed however and not a lot of cluttering is going on as far as i noticed. nothing stands out either so it's unfortunately by no means perfect, try a little more on the mixing front, be bolder and a little more aggressive.
The arrangement is good, although you could have maybe gotten a little more creative with your chord progression and swiched it up a bit. It's all the way the same progression so a little variation would have worked wonders IMHO.
Overall a nice track with some things that you could have made a lot better.
3.5/5
Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated.
Could imagine this in a game, Im not sure which type tho x). Maybe robots in the Wild Wild West xd
Well done!
Glad you liked it! ^_^
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