So I think your remix is pretty good. Might say that it's the best remix that I've heard recently. I'm not professional but let me be a little critical. You have a problem with 4 - 6 kHz. There is so much noise, so you should lower them with EQ. Also there is not enough mid frequencies. And that's all =) Try to remake project with this amendments and it will be better (but idk if you just like a lot of high frequencies). I like the idea and the synths. Good luck ^_^