there is lots of stuff that bothers me in this song
first thing is it dosent sound like it fallows a key or anything just a bunch of random notes
the glitces dont seem to match up with a tempo so its odd
around 3 mins it changes compleatly and dosent fit
the melody sounds good around 4 mins but the background is vary off
theres a few kicks at the start that sound like there cliping or vary muffeld
i do like the instraments used in this song as a hole but i fill like there is a detuned saw that dosent fit well
hope u dont take the massive amount of spelling errers to badlv im only doing this to try and help :p
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Author Comments
Hi!
I'm glad to share my latest track with you :)
Enjoy!
Oh, and don't forget to review and give feedback, i'll appreciate!
Thanks!
Special thanks
to my computer band:
FruityLoops
DrumLab
Massive x 6
SessionHorns x 3
Glitch 1.3
Akai LPD8
Daru925 responds:
I'll choose useful feedback over grammar any day. Thank you!
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 1,077
- Score
- Waiting for 1 more vote
- Uploaded
- Sep 4, 2014
- 5:30 PM EDT
- Genre
- Techno
- File Info
- Song
- 12.3 MB
- 5 min 22 sec
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Licensing Terms
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
