Track#8 from an OST I did for a Virtual Reality Tennis game called VR Open.
Cool from beginning to end, Alex. This could actually be something to apply to other games too. That guitar-like synth melody along to that hard banging beat is awesome. However, a bit more variation of instruments to this would make this even better! Also I found it a bit short, but maybe that's just my own preference.
I also suggest applying a bit of dynamics. It'll perk up the listening interest a notch.
Good points. Variation and dynamics are definitely things I need to work on. Length. Length too. Though often I stop working on a song when I feel like I'm just bullshitting new ideas in that don't fit naturally enough, hah.
Thanks a lot for the review, advice and nice words! o/
An Egypt desert feel... nice work
Thanks, glad you like it! Didn't think of it as an oriental-type melody, but in retrospect, it seems it definitely is. Thanks again!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
LunyAlex 
