this is very trance-like. and dde, you have to make a separate beat. listen to any rock song. listen to the hush sound and paramore. mainly paramore.
I think it needs to be a bit more clear. like it wasn't creepy enough to really gain from the sketchy voices, but somehow scrillix does it right. I think it's cus he used real words and stuff. I recommend this as well.
good luck!