You're Getting There

Heard the drums get out of line a little bit, meaning you lost the tempo. But you're tring to be different, and that's good. I'm not feeling the Hendrix-vibes, but it felt original, although not diverse. Plan it out more, choreograph it, it'll sound good. Everyone starts somewhere man, don't let these other ass holes' bad criticisms affect your practice, and don't think that just because they say they can play something, they're good at it. Also, it's easy to tell when someones lying about skill when they brag, atleast that's most of the time.

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if your going for the hendrix style, i dont think the notes are tied in enough with each other, his stuff is more sort of smooth sounding with some hard gaps between the notes in places for the sake of variety, your soloing just isn't quite smooth enough . . . there are gaps between the differen't notes. But very good melodies are created, that are supported by the rhythems underneath. Also hendrix always has at least one little part where he goes crazy playing virtuoso style then comes back to the melodic stuff, its always fun to throw in one of those. These are just suggestions the song is very good as is and you should be proud of it