good...very good

great job you found the syntrus sounds... that took me for ever!

well...

ummmm add more notes and instroments! don't be a scaredy cat! lol

well good job man! you're learnin!

Pretty good stuff

Nice and simple. If you were able to make it so it loops seamlessly it would be very usable in flash and game projects. The break in the beat was a good thing for the track. Sounds as if you're getting back in the groove; can't wait to hear more from you.