hmm...

I like it! This is pretty good to me! Nice Work! =)

Good flow...

Green apple did have a point about the main synth though - it's... a bit too bleery, if that's a word. I'm not sure. Sticks out like a sore thumb from 0:34 on with those full notes. However, I don't think it's that terrible; it just not fully matching the element of the song. I bet if you were to use a smoother main synth it would come out beautifully. Violin smooth, with a fluid beat. Probably too much work though. Nice song either way.

ok....

kind of chessy as hell. your lead synth just doenst do it for me.