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Drown in the fountain of youth

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guitar by me, Drums using FL, thanks to Dj-Svenso for samples plz review

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Ouch

My ears bleed! Don´t you see? They bleed!
Oh, the guitar was so disorted, and it played a really random melody with totally different speeds and melodies.

I doubt you thought out the melody especially much on this one, as it sounds like you were just playing random songs.

It seems like you in your "youth" (Audo youth ^_^) liked to play the guitar a lot.
And maybe... you weren´t that good at it then, though... lawl, this is actually good if you have more different synths and play it on th beat instead of out of frames like you did this time.

But I didn´t like this at all.

Originality is a 5, not good at all.

Clarity is a 3. OUCH MY EARS! The guitar is wway too loud.

Diversity is an 8, this sounds damn long compared to the file size... maybe it was therefore it was that lack of clarity?

Effort is 6. You need to give this a lot more work than you did. This hurts you audio page.

Overall is a 4. Not good.

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Yeah I think the bit rate was really low on this piece, erm I actually really liked this piece, and had fun making it :P oh well can't please them all! lol

Thanks again SBB

Peace Out!

Stealth

Love the guitars in this one

Sounds a bit like ZZ Top, it's really good, but not way to overdone, just leaves you saying wow. The drums were alright but kinda bland. FL did help in this one though, it's very good, keep making more <3

4/5

Stealth-Emergence responds:

I'm working on another rock piece at the moment, though I've been working on the same one for about 2 weeks on and off, and I keep F***ing it up everytime I record it! it's a bitch, I'll hopefully have it sorted soon then I'll upload

Thanks for your review! you didn't like the drums? oh man! lol oh wells can't win 'em all I suppose!

Thanks again!

Stealth

Nice style

ah yes.... this is a nice rock instrumental i'm gonna work on some too :D is it just me or is the guitar a bit out of tune? anyhow the melody is pretty nice. i'll send you a messege when I get my first rock song posted. I like the key change btw u had somewhere torwards the end :D.

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Thanks man! glad you liked it, sure when you've done you're rock piece I'll be glad to come by and check it out

Hit me up whenever it's on uploaded

oh also be sure to check by again real soon I got another piece I've been working on which I'll be uploading once it's finished

Peace Out Man!

Stealth

Awesome.

I could deffinatly see you becoming a proffesional musician some day.

Keep it up.

Nice, clean guitar riffs, catchy, well done.

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Thanks man! much appreciated

Peace Out!

Stealth

Interesting

The guitar is very very interesting i quite enjoyed listening to this although i listen alot of very technical metal... I see that you are only really doing rock. You should have a crack at some metal tracks, i think you have the potential to create something decent. Great track.

Although i am only making trance check out my stuff maybe you could give me some tips.

Tommi AKA BoneBoy

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Man I plan to do some heavier stuff, Just wanna hit on something good for it! once I've got something worthy of submission I'll be sure to upload it!

I'll be checking by some of your audio and give some reviews too!

Peace Out!

Stealth

Credits & Info


Listens
1,668
Downloads
255
Votes
12
Score
4.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 29, 2006
5:12 PM EDT
Genre
General Rock
File Info
Song
1.9 MB
2 min 3 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.