I like the fast pace sound you have here on this and jumps right out the gate with good quality and rhythm
~X~
Here's a little something I'd planned to post soon after this stuff: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/589609
...time flew, brewing were the winds of June, blue were the roomy skies, and summer.... is nigh! Once again! So before before (summer) becomes after even more - I suppose I'd better post this then. New words and verse to this tune smooth as soothing dunes: here's to you.
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Waaay past summertime, I I-I-I-I-I-I-I I'm fine...
Making remixes like I feel I've done mine
Time is streaming but I feel I found a blind spot
Kneeling in to write another line I rhyme lots
I want to make the most of the time that I've got
And I've got things on my head that need taking out
Don't mistake this inner peace for a raking doubt
Or vice versa, wound so tight that I could burst
Other times I'm fly like the Prince of Persia
Burning in the flames I nurture
But try to live cause I'm a learner
Mother Earth we don't deserve her
People say they'll change the world but I'm a change their world and I'ma go a step further I'ma
Change myself then I'ma change the world!
Chained myself till I was breaking nerves!
I take a word and then I make a verse!
Take a beat but someone made it first! They make it worth.
So far in life I've been nigh confused,
I felt high but I came down on Truth!
It took me down like a set of thunderin' hoofs, like a boot
Yo truth I'm still under you
At times I wonder what I can and what I've come to do
At times I try to see the world in a funner view
I see it grey but I'd rather see it sparkling a sunset may be dark
But it's we who make the world darken so change your heart
Depart on a better path! No path? Maybe start one!
As life moves on I harden and grow cold (grow old)
A decade passed by like I've grown mold
Time takes its tolls but it's OK I'll pay them
Though the bills pile high and I think of escaping
Am I ripe or still waiting, do I fight or evade them?
Life's great contemplations, so many have I slayed but I'ma
( Maul through them! I'm all fluent I'ma! 3x
And the music keeps my my mind moving, tune in I'ma )
Change myself then I'm a make my peace!
Make this place a place we wish we'd never leave!
Give people shoulders if they ever grieve!
Give them life, give them melodies!
Give them the beholders sleeve to sneeze in
Don't let the trees thin
Get rid of the greed and give peeps some meaning
I see you screaming in your tethered sleep
Then take a leap and be feathered or drop down to the nether re-gions
That's something nobody should ever see
Will I make an impact... will people even remember me?
Do I save or do I spend my cheese?
How do I get what I pretend I need?
Do I take a step or fend at ease?
Do I attack or defend my steeze?
Do I sit and relax so I can muster up the energy!
Or take a run and run and live till I'm seventy
Or spend my time on NG while in hell I be?
Hella strange life, but soon as I see that goal of mine - I'ma aim twice!
I'm not missing!
I'm growing visions till they take flight!
Sit in the dark till I make light!
Get out and cure my stage fright!
That soggy damp cookie of life? I aint bite!
This world aint right! This world aint ripe!
We say we're making it better but we just make lies!
We need to get it together we still make life!
But the new generations are so raging they need to break right
Out of this damn stagnation, this lands damnations,
This calamity this strangulation break the bad and let the sunrays break in! Yeah, I'ma
( chorus )
Change myself then I'ma make it right!
Make you pick up your own fists and fight!
Make you feel like you can take it high!
Make you feel like you can break the sky!
That's how I feel... take a plane and fly!
Fly out of the rain, leave the pain behind!
Fly to the otherside and the radiant shine!
Take your time, find your pace and mind!
Open up to the world and it won't break your spine!
We're living like on the darkside of the moon
Time to move the sun, so we can get sun too uh
( chorus > )
I like the fast pace sound you have here on this and jumps right out the gate with good quality and rhythm
~X~
Appreciate it X!
Delivery wasn't perfect, and neither was the mixing, but the rhymes were on point. Could probably use a little more FX work on your flows. Hard compression, chorus, delay, etc. There are lots of tutorials out there for that though, and EQ. I won't wax lyrical. Enjoyed it!
Thanks for this one too! Actually reviewed this before the original huh, and for some reason I missed this one too... I do like the energy in this one more than in the other, but for sure still room for improvement on many planes. Thanks again!
Wo wo wo..
Great !
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This is rather impressive! Kinda chill for my tastes, but there's no denying the mad skills at work!
Mad thanks! ;)
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