WOW-ness
WOW. just Wow. You have REALLY expanded upon the original. Really impressive. If this wasn't so short, it's something I'd hope to hear over at OCRemix! I didn't recognize the tune at first (not a bad thing ^_') thinking it was one of the later levels that I always die before I get to ^=^. ANYWAYS! i REALLY like all the effect that you have in the beginning of this one, and that voice that you used, very VERY nice touch. My ear wanted to hear that voice say something again at about :28. and maybe one on :44. The original tune gets overpowered in parts (but that might just be my speakers) and I'm not the biggest fan of how it ends. It sounds like you slapped Kirby dying right at the end . . . kinda sticks out too much. But you ReMixed this so awesomely that it is a minor thing.
PLEASE do lengthen it