Great to see another Music Maker Jam user on here.
For your first track, it's pretty solid. It could start out a little smoother, as well as build up a tiny bit more. But, that's only a matter of personal taste. That being said, it has a rise, climax, and a fall. So, all in all, it's a good track.
I look forward to hearing more of your work,
Cera
MMJ I.D.: Cerasasori