Elves at War

My Thoughts
The only part that had a christmas theme was the jingle bell part and the bells. I thought it was more of a normal based techno song. The loop repeat was great since it was hard to tell that it relooped. It sounded like a beggining war theme or war in action theme. The bells and electrical instruments combining on a couple parts gave it the sound that really brought me in to listening to it more than once.

My Category Thoughts
The quality was at a fare good rate, nothing showing it to be hardcore, but good nonetheless. Like always a lot more original from stuff I usually hear and review which is a treat. You seemed to try hard enough on this song, considering how well it looped.

Delicious

I nice military/industrial sounding mix along with classic christmas bells and uhm, Jingle Bells! Must have took some time to create this! Fivened

Ahh

Like a total christmas song. I got so totally into the christmas mood of this.
The bells, he winter feeling, the shakers, (whatever they are called in english) and especially the melody.

Well, the melody was really not great, it´s very bland and I doubt you put much thought into it.

As I can see some of the melodies which you were too lazy to lay again and just looped, they were off beat and not pleasant at all to listen to.

I don´t know about thisd tune. There is so much which could have been improved, and there is so much that you could have done to make it better, still it´s actually a very good song.

So, I must this time take it as an averaqe of the minor scores.

Originality is a 7 because it sounds very much like other christmas songs, but still it had much originality.

Clarity is a 6 because it wasn´t mastered well and many tracks were far too loud while others were low.

Diversity is a 7, not too much of that here.

Effort is a 7. This needs more work.

The average is 6.67, which means the overall must be 7.

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Hmm...

What do I think? Well its good, pretty darn good. But I dont think it can beat David Orr's piece, the title of which I have forgotten. ITs gettin a good score, the only qualm i have over it is that a few of the instruments seem poorly picked. But its still good so dont fret. Congrats!