Damn nice !
The melody in this one is flawless to me man, that's the kinda song i'd sit back, with some homies or with my girl, just chillin', sippin' on a 40, Good beat man, really good beat ! I knew you could come up with some funky shit boy, and you're damn good at it too, can i suggest you ONE thing again tho. I Suggest you take out the "occasional" piano touch or the sound that sounds like a piano. It kinda fucks up the beat when your funky melody comes in near the end.
By the way, that melody at the end ? Ooooh weeee homie ! It had me bouncin' like a motha fucka ! That's what rap always been about man, good ol' instrumental to bring back the funk in all of us !
So as i said... if you could just take out these "dum.... dum.... dum.... dum.. dum dum.. dum.... etc..." <-- i hope you know what im talkin about... Do this, put the new version here, and make sure i'll download it, burn it on a CD and play it fuckin' loud in my car when im rollin' downtown.
5/5
You Better Keep At It !
Take it easy,
B.I
Hella good beat boy