This is a pretty decent song, but the one major thing that i didn't like was the way it ended. I've never liked the way some songs just stop especially when it clearly hasn't ended yet (such as this one). Fixing this is very easy just have it fade out at the end, and let the song end that way let the listener know the song is ending instead of throwing them off a cliff.

i certainly like what I'm listening to but i feel as though some of your hats could come up and a good crunchy sound effect could be added in to give the emotional hit to the shuttle build up other than that GG WP