00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

VOORz just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

N1NJA - Origins

Share Download this song

Author Comments

Hey guys! So yeah. I've been kinda working on this track on the side. I found a bass sound I had and turned it into a lead, which is why the sound is kinda distorted near the drop.


I would love any feedback. Thanks!

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===

Wow, right off the bat I have to admit that I really love your sound design. The kick is nice and the plucks really stand out to me as being outrageously good sounding. If those plucks were a girl, I would definitely take her on a date and be to embarrassed to say anything. Er, but yeah, nice sound design. The kick could have a little more bass to it, however. As much as I love your sound design, I feel like where this song is really lacking is in the arrangement - it feels far too repetitive, and the chord progression does not change noticeably, which is generally no good unless your melodies are amazing. I actually enjoy your melodies, but the song needs more variation in the arrangement to really shine.

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Mixing: 3/4
Arrangement: 2/4
Composition: 3/4
Overall (this is not an average): 7.5/10

Credits & Info

Listens
949
Downloads
31
Score
Waiting for 1 more vote

Uploaded
Dec 12, 2015
12:55 PM EST
Genre
House
File Info
Song
8.9 MB
3 min 53 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.