Nononono

Random notes, irritating choir, just no

Not too bad; not that good either...

-Originality- Pretty good.
-Diversity- Changes only like 4 times.
-Clarity- Not that great...
-Effort- Doesn't sound like you put a lot in this.
-+-OVERALL-+- Here's a tip: This isn't to make you discouraged. It's just to help you out. Don't make songs for a while. Listen to a few past the melody, like, listen to how clear the song is, what instruments they used, & what effects they used to make the song sound a lot better, and then you'll hit a point where you can be really good, just like Xx-ChiRoN-xX & me. If you need Vanguard or any more tips, PM me & I'll send you a text file full of tips & I'll throw in Vanguard for free!

EARNINGS:
3/5
5/10

Thanks for your time,
-DJ DaVinster