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This one reminds me when I started in music production. Good melodies and ideas, but they lack the correct mixing, especially in terms of compressing the leads or the vocal samples. I gotta say that I enjoyed the breakdown at 2:05, that dry bass fits perfectly with the chords. Keep it up and try experimenting with compressor, Maximus (if you use FL) and limiters. Hope it helps you improve! ;P
>GTB