Interesting. That fade-in was a little furtive (I could barely hear it until around :11), but still effective overall. I don't really regard this song as structurally complete. The melodies at 1:24 are nice, but I think that section sounds more like a breakdown than a coda. Otherwise you have this strangely inconclusive two-part piece here. The mixing and mastering are good - I can hear everything clearly. You also may have needed a smoother transition at 1:24 - even a simple crash or something would've helped. The instrumentation is enjoyable. I dunno. I have mixed feelings about this one because there's not a lot to complain about, but you also could've done a lot more with this piece in terms of progression, emotional contrast, etc. Either way, keep at it, man. ;)

Nice theme