Needs drums

I think it needs some strong druum beats at the start, and the techno sounds more high pitched and louder. good work anyway

Creepy

Not bad use of intruments, but u REALLY need to diversify. Imagin how many ppl nag to me, "you need to add this... err.. or that >.>". lol

To save the emberasment, i wont go on with my faults and focus on some constructive critique.

1st - Your acids leads are ok, but get annoying. its good for this form, but go to a thin saw or a lead, acids are no good without proper equalization.

2nd - Lower the mid in your equallizer, its killing your quality. Lower that, and set your treble to about +50%. You will get professional sound. (Mess around with it to get a good feel.)

Lastly - Diversify, add strings for depth, piano for feel, and look for a few free VSTs, the help out allot.

Other than that, you have potential and good rhythm ^^.

Hmm... Not bad I guess.

I was hoping for drums when I started listening, but I was soonly dissapointed. The melody isn't really that great, especially not great enough to have it play over and over and over and over like you did through out the whole song. Sounds like you're just starting out, but you're headed in a good direction.