I'm actually pretty impressed by this, not bad at all especially as your first try! I haven't listened to this genre very much but it sounds like it would fit in an 8-bit game very well. Hopefully someone uses your music for such. What I like most is that even though you're just starting out you've seem to have picked up on how to reuse patterns (which you don't really do much here) without being repetitive. That takes a certain level of experience to get a feel for. 1:24, I love those bells.
Props, 5'd