In Your Mouth I'll Vomit

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In Your Mouth I'll Vomit

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The Sorbet Oasis Pêche Pomme Cassis is the only food that can't be vomited. Certified.
(Blue Album)

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BrolfThePaladin

2016-04-18 06:57:59

First I was like "What the fuck man!?"
Then I was like ♪┏(°.°)┛┗(°.°)┓┗(°.°)┛┏(°.°)┓ ♪
And now...I'm kinda terrified. I mean, how. HOW?`
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!?

You did such a great tune and give it SUCH a gross name!
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!?

Jeez you're the first one who make me cringe and dance at the same time and also making me MAD for making a GOOD TUNE.

God dammit enough internet for me today.

5/5 Stars
┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵ ┻━┻

MysteriousPresence responds:

Ahah thank you so much ! Will I win again this round ? X)
In fact I wanted to mix epicness and "murky", that's why I chose this name ! The use of future and the reverse formulation of the sentence bring an epic aspect while... hum... no need to explain why the name is gross ! ^^
Thanks again for the review, and glad you liked it ! :D

Virginia-Slimm

2016-03-23 09:12:31

I chose this track for review bc of the superb choice of title! :D=d; (emoticon vomiting into another emoticon)
Melody : 2/2
Instruments : 1.5/2
Personality : 1/1
The melody arrangement is pretty epic. All of the elements have nice context and interplay. I do agree with @Zechnition that the tails of some instrument's sounds are a little too long and obscuring some of the finer elements. There are lots of good elements so cutting the reverb or bell tails would make the other instruments shine through a little better in the mix.The avant garde (spelling) editing in the breakdown is very cool. I would have liked to hear it get weirder than that, maybe a little more glitchy with the chops and edits. I think you were onto something cool there. :)
Cohesive composition, admirable use of powerful string section throughout.
That's good music man!

MysteriousPresence responds:

That's a wonderful emoticon vomiting into another emoticon ! :3
Thanks for the review !
I'm glad you think the melody is epic, that's what I wanted to do (mixing epic and... "murky" ?), I will definitely work on this "plucky" aspect you're advising me to do !
I feel bad about the glitchy aspect, because in hindsight, you're all so right, I definitely should have insisted more on that ! I think I should have brutally stopped the music at 02:39, that would be surprising, but frustrating too ! X)
Thanks again for the review ! =)

Zechnition

2016-03-22 17:14:57

First off I really like the beginning but around 0:34 the sounds don't feel like they fit together. Same with 0:50, the instruments feel all jumbled together maybe make the strings less "plucky". (I don't really know the terminology but less sustain / shorter notes == plucky) At 1:17 every thing is too loud and the stoping of the music doesn't fit together with everything, though if you got the music stopping just right I think it would sound really good. Really good transitions and altogether the track sounds put together well. Also maybe drag the end on a little bit more or add some of those music stopping things if you get them just right. Altogether your song just needs some more mixing and it'd be great! Keep up the good work! =D

MysteriousPresence responds:

You again ? Are you following me ? X)
Thanks for the review !
Now that I think about it, I should have insisted more on the "glitchy" aspect of the music, thanks for helping me out on this point !
I didn't think about the "plucky" side of the synthesizer, but you're right about it, it would have fitted more with the personality of the music !
About the mixing, unfortunately, I reached the limits of the software I'm using, I'm waiting for FL Studio to be available on Mac, I have been saving money for a while now, and I have the budget ! :3
Thanks again ! =)