I like the cute mood and synths at the beginning. The effects were pretty cheesy, yet effective at enhancing the mood. The piece progresses really slowly, but at least you added a bit of atmosphere at 1:01. The mastering is solid, but until 1:21 this piece feels really contained and tight, probably because it lacks a lot of lower frequencies. The mastering is quiet, but I can hear everything clearly. You used panning and reverb effectively too. Overall, it’s pretty minimalistic and lacks an overarching sense of direction. It has a sort of continuity to it, without much ebb and flow. You could’ve used more phrasing and dynamic contrast here. I like how you varied the melodies at 3:02, but they lacked an energy and finality to them that I expected as the piece came towards the end. This piece is catchy and well-structured, but you could’ve done a lot more with it. Overall, it felt very safe and a little lack-luster by the end. This is especially disappointing because I enjoyed the atmosphere and instrumentation a lot. Overall solid work. Keep at it, SynthGoddess. ;)
8/10
SynthGoddess 
