Good but still work on the rhythms

Look, now it gets better!
The voice at the intro was the best thing for this, i guess you tried to make a song for an airplane because if this was a, look at the sky song the voice wouldn't really fit it.
I really like the synths you put in this, and the voice is pretty good too.
The drumloop is good too and fits this song, i like the bleep sounds.
Good work, but i say again, try to work on the rhythms.