Good I guess but...
even though it was supposed to be a remix...it's not really advised that you actually use the same synths as from the original track. Originality is a definite factor in the world of Electronica. To me this was less 'remixed' and more 're-arranged'.
ps. I really didn't think this should have been submitted as Trance either. In my opinion even the original track isn't trance. It's more ambient.