Not that bad.

This song is pretty good, my favourite part is the drop and i think its by far the best too. You could work a Little more on your lead sounddesign in my opinion but as Long as the drop hits hard iits all fine :)

This track was very enjoyable.

In my opinion, I think u should of piked some harder kick n snare drum samples because the ones u use sound kind of flat, but that's just me.
The dubstep bass you use are very unique and sound great! One thing I would say about it though, is make them louder. One thing I've learned from making music myself is to always make the dubstep bass and the drums the loudest things in your song, especially when trying to make harder types of electronic music.

Also, the ambient samples and thunderstorm sounds u use are extremely appealing and draw me in. It kind of give your song an Xtrullor type feel to it.
Overall, this track is beautiful and I will be downloading it.

Before I go, I would appreciate it if you checked out the remix I did for this track. Yours, in my opinion, is still better but I would love the support from you!
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https://youtu.be/cUtzXAO1HHI

I like the nature sounds and atmosphere. The intro was a little drawn-out, but I’m enjoying the sense of climax and instrumentation. I like the cute pizzicatos and upbeat string melodies at 1:23 and how that contrasts with the heavy breaks at 1:38. The drop was full of variety and emotion, and I love how you brought on some structural contrast at 2:38. You might have overdone the reverb at 3:15, though, and the strings get a little lost amidst the overpowering melodies at 3:23, although this probably warrants an easy volume level adjustment. Still, you’ve blended some very organic sounds with electronica very well here. I would’ve liked to see you change the drop a bit more the second time around, just to add a sense of development to the piece, but you already have a lot of variety within the drop itself. I thought you also could’ve done more to have the energy wane a bit before the big release at 5:02. Also, this piece is long enough that you could stand to vary the main string riff (:53 and other places) more. Overall, though, this is solid work. It’s smooth-flowing, well-mastered, energetic, catchy, and well-scored. Nice work! ;D

9/10

It is perfect for a 3rd "Travel" level in GD, be the first one to make it! ;)

I agree with most of what ChaelMusic said, some of the drops and melodies are a bit weird, but other than that, this song is definitely your best so far!

Good job and keep up the good work! ;)