(If you use headphones I'm sure the experience will be better :) )
This piece is called "Red Light Syndrome" and is a collab with peachymaiden! and also the fifth composition we make together :D
It's also our entry for the NGAUC knock-out round 2016! :D
Peachy made the vocals, lyrics and almost everything (guitars, drums, etc.) XD the part I made is the piano melody.
You can find peachy's Youtube channel in:
http://www.youtube.com/user/peachymaiden
Hope you all like it, see you!
Javi
yay im glad you guys made it into the ngadm you are some of my favorite musicians (though this isnt even my favorite song by you!). of course you are against midimachine who is another one of my faves so thats kind of a bummer lol but im looking forward to hear what you make : )
don't forget to spend some time mixing! gogo!
Hi Johnfn! Thanks so much for your support! :D ahaha, yes! mixing is super important
I've heard midimachine's music, and he's awesome! so it's gonna be a great competition.
Thanks again for your words! :D
The atmospheric fade-in at the beginning was a cool idea. I love the instrumentation, and peachymaiden’s voice is really light and flowing. The lyrics at 1:25 are pretty jarringly violent, and don’t really compliment the mood of the piece all that well. The echo effects at 2:14 and other places are a little cheesy, but overall the composition is really strong here. I also think the drums could be a bit stronger in the mix. The chopped-up vocals at 3:40 didn’t fit the character of the piece well IMO. I appreciated the breakdown at 4:18, although the piece drags on a bit long. I like the layered vocals starting around the 5-minute mark. They add a great sense of climax and resolve to the piece. Overall, this is really strong work. Keep it up, you two! :)
9/10
Hi man! thanks so much for taking the time to write such helpful review! :D
We'll take all suggestions with pleasure, It means a lot that you took the time to check out all parts of the song :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Jabicho 
