Ok ..

I like the beat, but the singing has to go!!! Id rather listen to my arm breaking in 3 places as i jump off a roof and hit the ground.

ewww

its just horrible screamo you want good screamo listen to some jfac job for a cowboy

lose the vocals

i would have gave it a 4 if you los the vocal good song bad singing

oh my god

Wow, it looks like somone actually "tried" to make a song.

this actually made me laugh, i'm serious, its that bad... god who ever sang that was waaaay of key shit..

and even better is that you actually tried...

oh god, thanks for making me laugh.
i needed it.