someone tell me where to get good vocals so i dont have to look
vocals would be great.
sounds like something you'd hear from vampirefreaks.com and sounds a little like freezepop a little too. ^.^ the others who gave it a bad score are mean 'case theres alot of other people on here that make worse music than mr green apple.
ohhhhh hahaha waaaaay worse....some one needs to get banned from voting on NG. its ruining the scene. o well. just keep rokin out!!!thats all i gotta say
i use that fl ghetto voicce for my music.
i love FL. i pwn it in the nuts
dude if you master stuff you can make even simple vocals bad ass
Fruityloopy to the Max
Melodies decent, but the samples/mixing is weak. The synth bass or whatever is just goofy and repetetive, nothing blends well, and the drum samples are weak by themselves.
Try experimenting more with sounds. Put some mastering/mixing on the drums to get more out of them.
The arrangement is a bit weak too - just kind of moves from random part to random part without anything defining coming out of it. They aren't bad by themselves, but they just don't seem to go together.
Just keep working and move on to the next one...also try to get something besides Fruityloops if that's what you're using.
thx for listening and the good review. ive definetely been working on some mastering and mixing for my next track. it will be loads and loads better than these first tracks. I need to get the FL bible really bad and a drum pad and a midi and a mixer. i dont have the money right now but ill probably be coming out with some wicked stuff this summer.
hmms
not very good.
about my song
well technicly its not just one note because i used arpeggiators snd effects
on the pattern sequencer the arpeggiators looked like one note but arppegiators arent one note....so
ok it was a one chord song....why would you make a song without a progression and garbage noises. im guna give you advice that ive realized from a lot of the shit in the audio portal. unless your bounc3 or other legit people on NG, speed some time on your submissions, more then half the time it seems people are submitting things just so they can be on NG.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Mr-green-apple 
