It's okay...

The piano came across as a bit dull in the beginning, but significantly improved throughout. I felt it lacked a healthy ammount of variety though, which was a dissapointment. Fairly short as well. (Though my songs are short as well :P)

I think I can see where you are going with this piece, but it really just didn't spark my interest and is slightly (I use this lightly) boring in my opinion. I think adding some more instrumentation wouldn't hurt either, though that's not a big deal.

Okay, but not great.

Soft...lonely...fragile...lost...

Great song. The melody was great and the cords went in well with the rest of the song. It was just a little bit too empty to me. Parts I thought needed some cords to go along with it, and there is no really interesting rhythms. It was a little repetitive too.

With a little work, it's possible to fix all of those thing. Happy music making!

P.S. Rate and review some of my stuff at newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1453074