Paradise

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Paradise

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A completely original techno song by me (DJ CJ Doty). If you have any criticism, I'd love to hear it to improve myself. I apologize in advance for the repetitiveness, that's just how I prefer my techno...

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sciencefreako

2016-09-28 22:04:02

-I love that you gave it variation :D There's still the base notes, which is good, and I'm glad that you changed it up :)
-At the beginning you had the base notes going which is good.
-Then around :40 I really started to stop and listen hard.
-Love how you took the notes, and mixed it up with the base.
-It didn't seem too repetitive this time, I liked it. I'm fine with repetitiveness as long as it isn't the --same notes in the same octave, in the same beat throughout the whole song.
-I can't find much wrong with it, listened to it twice, three times.
-It sounds like you put a lot of work into this song. Well done.
4.5/5 stars :)

DJ-Doty responds:

Thank you so much for taking the time to write a detailed analysis! =)

ni2shooter123

2016-09-27 22:24:17

It was a good song but at 2min I don't reply like how the melody changed suddenly and you changed it again at 2.15ish

DJ-Doty responds:

Thanks for the info! I was going for variation because this is a near 4-minute track. Do you think it should have been more similar sounding to the original melody or something else? :)

CV35W

2016-09-27 21:52:59

Nice track!

It is repetitive as you said, but I'm not one to stand in the way of personal preference.
The main melody is pretty nice and the beat is solid.
As for other notes, I think the beginning could have been much more toned down for a smoother transition.

You've got potential. Keep it up!

DJ-Doty responds:

Thanks for your support! I appreciate it. :)
Yeah, YouTube tutorials really help with really getting the most out of the sounds. ;)