Good for a beat

The noise at the beginning is a bit irritating, the hi-hats are going on too long.
But they give a good song, only thing is you have to make them shorter.
The Wooooh sound sounds good.
The bleep sound was good, but you made that one too short.
You have to add a melody to it and make it longer.
It sounds good, for a beat but if you want to make a song out of it you have to add melody's ;)