Nice

So this was actually a pretty "CRISP" sound you have here it was only twenty seconds long though thats where I think you should have made it a tad longer especially with the quality you have on this one, I do like the sound here and wouldnt mind hearing much more of this as it was pretty solid.

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I think you should have made it a tad longer especially with the quality you have on this one,

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