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Author Comments

I SPENT AGES ON THIS PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK!
USED GARAGEBAND AS DAW
NO PLUGINS
THANKS FOR LISTENING

Edit: Replaced file with controlled volume and got rid of that weird bit at the end. Thanks for noticing it, guys.

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K-oztron

2017-01-04 10:28:16

Sounds good! I liked the part at 1:19 :D
However, I think that the drums at the start are a bit too random.
I suggest that you save up for Logic or Ableton if ur on mac, they're much better than GarageBand. Keep up the good work :)

Squeegee4554 responds:

Logic is my aim! XD

Stardust-Nation

2016-12-09 20:57:07

You're only 14? We're the same age! Shh. It's a secret tho. Nice job with this song. It's a bit more varied than your other ones, but that part with the silence was weird.

Squeegee4554 responds:

Oh yeah - what the hell is that doing there? Thanks for telling me. I'll remove that now!

EDT: DONE!

McGorilla42

2016-11-23 15:09:18

Good, man! Your song has a solid structure with the intro/verse/pre-chorus/chorus very clearly defined, with good dynamics and weird-ass bridge that appears after 10 seconds of silence haha (maybe cut that out, but it could work as a brand new song - it's not inherently bad, it's just a bit outta place). You have a melody, a good chord progression, a nice little beat.

I don't want you to get a big head, but I'm genuinely impressed that you're only 14 and making music on this level (sorry to keep bringing up your age). Stay humble and keep learning! You're on the right path.

Squeegee4554 responds:

Thank you dude! that is amazing!

Mople

2016-11-19 03:21:15

This is a really good track! Though personally I think the drop should alternate the melody a little bit. Make it more varied. Then it would be even better!

Squeegee4554 responds:

Ok. Thanks!

Spikrin

2016-11-02 15:37:21

I like it! Keep it up! The best yet so far!

Squeegee4554 responds:

Thank you, dude! You're a real help to me!